sunny boy books

This is my second fiction and this time I have put some thought to it. Please rate it and give me a review as I need to improve my writing.Read the first chapter for more. I can''''t tell everything in a description, can I?PLEASE READ IT!!!! Statistics Overall Score .star-7816-overall-4122e83bf5814ce8b6f544ac0ea0541f:after{ width: 44.5359% } Style Score Story Score Grammar Score Character Score Total Views : 7,612 Average Views : 1,269 Followers : 28 Favorites : 6 Ratings : 16 Pages : 29 Advertisement Go to Table of Contents Mark as Not Interested Follow Favorite Read Later Fiction breaking rules? Report Advertisement Author