I'm not ending my story, but i realized how half-assed i was doing it. So i'm going to take today to fix the story and develop a better status system and create a glossary (I’ll probably look at rpg games and see how they use stats and make my own system from that, I’ll let you guys know which games I look at if I do). I'm also gonna look at some professional stories and look at some writing tips to see how I should be formatting my story. Comment and let me know of some good fantasy world stories I can look at and see how to introduce monsters and items into the writing smoothly.

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